Hello! I'm Burton, a few might've seen me around the forums. My hobby is making music whenever I can; It's just for fun, I'm not a professional or anything (although I'd very much like to improve). Hopefully I'm allowed to post this kind of stuff in the lounge. So lately I've been working on this remix of a Japanese song called "Only my Railgun". 22 hours were spent on this project so far- that means I'm at the point where I've listened to it so many times, I don't know what to think of it anymore -_- And I've come to the conclusion that I need more ears for this remix, so I'm asking all of you who've read this far to do me a favor- please give it a listen and give some constructive feedback. Refrain from using phrases like "go die", "this is the worst thing ever" etc WARNING- Contains electronic music similar to dubstep (the music that all adults hate apparently). If you don't like that genre, I'd give this track a skip* I hope this link works https://soundcloud.com/burton773/remix-only-my-railgun-test-2 It's a work in progress and I hope to improve and add to it (thinking of adding a base line to the first verse and crashes throughout the song). I might've overdone the wub wubs Example template: First Impressions: [...] I like: [Time marker] I dislike: [...] I think that [...] is too [...] This [instrument] is too [...] This [part] is too [...] You should work on: [...] Overall [...] Please include other thoughts such as the balance of instruments and how the song is structured. *I'm not responsible for damaged speakers, hearing nor the loss of hope in music or humanity.